AQUA
By M.A. George
YA Paranormal
612 pages
Publication Date- April 16th, 2014
Meet Layla McKelland:
Novelist (unpublished, but cut her some slack…seventeen is a bit early to despair),
Slightly neurotic introvert (Alright, let’s be honest…there’s no “slightly” about it),
International Woman of Mystery, and…
Okay, just scratch the bio.
The only real “mystery” in Layla’s life is why her father has never been on the scene. Or why her mother drags Layla to a new coastal home every year.
Nothing about the latest hometown seems too newsworthy…until a routine day at the beach leaves Layla questioning whether she’s read one too many paranormal fantasy novels. The plot thickens when a random guy claims to know things about her father—a bizarre claim he backs up with an equally impossible stunt. And Layla soon finds herself on the wrong side of a mysterious attempted drowning…on her own kitchen floor.
When all is done, Layla will attest that fact is far stranger than fiction. And nothing in real life is ever as transparent as it seems…Not even water.
Especially not water.
EXCERPT
“Layla…Can you hear me? Try to open your eyes, Layla.”
I recognize that voice—echoing from some faraway land—yet I can’t quite place it. I’m fairly certain that it usually isn’t marked by an anxious quiver, one it’s seemingly trying to suppress. I know it’s not Mom or Cora. For one, Mom wouldn’t be making any effort to hide her maternal hysterics. And though Aunt Cora can be a tad on the masculine side sometimes, she doesn’t actually sound like a guy.
“Layla…Please try to open your eyes.” Definitely a guy…and since I don’t really know many of those, that narrows the list down pretty quickly.
A garbled groan oozes from my throat, as my head rolls to one side to cough out a gurgling breath. I hear the scatter of dusty grit puffing away in the gust from my lungs, and I wrench my lids open to a heap of washed-up seaweed on a bed of sand. I roll onto my back again, squinting against the glaring daylight. A head moves in to eclipse the sun, its backlit face obscured by shadow. The halo of short curls dances and sways in the breeze, a pleasant greeting filtering through the air in that familiar voice.
“Hey there…You sure can give a guy a heart attack, you know that?” I can only respond with another groan, pressing my palms into the sand in an attempt to sit up. “Whoa, whoa, whoa…Take it easy there. Get your bearings first.” Tristan’s hand gently presses my shoulder back down, and I flop backward like a ragdoll upon the sandy dune.
“Wh-what happened?” I stammer, clenching my eyes closed again, as the vivid remembrance of suffocation charges like a bull through my brain. “How’d you get me out of the water?”
“You took care of that yourself,” he puffs out a relieved chuckle. “We found you washed up face-down on the sand. You must’ve pulled yourself to shore before you passed out. I should’ve warned you to watch out for rip currents.”
“Yeah,” I cough out a sarcastic snort with a mumble under my breath. “Rip currents.” My gut reaction is to tell him I know what the hell a rip current is…and they don’t have elbows or hairy heads. But then my thoughts flash to the spinning whirlpool that sucked me under, and along to the insanity that’s been polluting my brain lately. Maybe yet another screw has come loose from my unhinged mind. Best I just keep my mouth shut.
But wait a minute…
“We?” I fight against Tristan’s cautioning advice and rise up to sitting. “What do you mean ‘we’ found you washed up on the beach? Who’re we?”
“She’s not one for expressing gratitude, is she?” A shiver of goose bumps crawls over my skin at the taint of madness in that high-pitched snicker.
Pyke.
“You just get the hell away from me.” Suddenly I’m scrambling to my knees, scurrying around behind Tristan and practically jumping piggy-back onto him, my pruny fingers digging into his bare shoulders. I said I’m no coward; but apparently, I stand corrected. I fish for more words but come up empty. All I’ve got is the icy glare I’m aiming past Tristan’s shoulder, squaring Pyke’s face in my sights.
A knowing smirk contorts his bearded lips, and it strikes me that his grungy hair is as dry as the day we met. He’s once again stark-dry from head to toe; and logic would lead one to conclude he had no possible hand in my near-drowning. Too bad logic has forsaken me, ever since Pyke came barging into my life.
“Get far, far, far away from me…and then take a few extra steps, just for good measure.” My eyes narrow a bit further as I struggle to rally the hard-edged conviction in my voice. “Start. Walking. Now.”
He just crosses his arms defiantly with a swaggering tilt to his head, as another bray of laughter shakes his chest. He lists a little closer, a taunting leer shadowed beneath his dark brow. “And here I thought you were starting to warm up to me.” I hadn’t noticed from a distance just how deep purple those circles under his eyes are…perhaps because they weren’t there until I jammed my thumb into his eye sockets.
I fix him in my searing glare with a low snarl. “I’d sooner warm up to Satan.”
“Well, of course…” A wicked smile lights his eyes. “He has Hellfire and whatnot at his disposal.”
“Enough, Pyke,” Tristan shuts him down with a sharp reprimand. “She’s not exactly having the best day…Now’s not the time for games.”
I silently thank Tristan with a subtle squeeze of his shoulder, his sun-baked skin a stark contrast to my clammy hands. All this talk about warming up to people, and in fact I’m chilled to the core. There’s an unnerving quiet while Pyke debates how much my torment is worth to him. I realize I’ve been holding my breath when he turns with a shrug to head for the water. A shudder rolls through me as I draw in a lungful through chattering teeth.
“You’re shaking,” Tristan’s brow furrows as he turns to look over his shoulder. “Are you cold?”
“No,” I absently shake my head, pulling my trembling fingers from his back. “At least I don’t think so.” The truth is, sheer terror and bone-chilling cold bring on a remarkably similar shiver. Judging from the fact that it’s at least a hundred degrees out today, I’m fairly certain it’s mainly terror behind my quivering limbs.
“We should get you to the hospital,” he turns and puts his arm around my waist for support. “Just to make sure you’re okay.”
“I’m fine,” I shake my head. “I just want to go home.”
“Are you sure?” He raises a questioning eyebrow, and I give an insistent nod. “Well, you’re not driving,” he contends. “We’ll go in my car.” Funny how his voice really deepens when he’s being especially serious.
I reluctantly concede with a nod. Truth be told, I’m far from fit for driving right now. Physically, I’m pretty sure I’m coming around and will be fine. My state of mind is another story. And as if I haven’t had enough mental torment for the week, I make the mistake of looking back over my shoulder. I can’t seem to stop myself from checking for Pyke. Knowing he’s somewhere behind me just gives me that hair-raising feeling of being followed. Only he’s definitely not tailing us…He’s wading out into the waves, glancing all around as though he’s searching for something. He seems to catch sight of whatever it is he’s seeking; and he springs from the seabed, arching forward into a dive with arms in a point overhead.
But of course, nothing with Pyke can end that simply.
Just before he enters the water—his pointed hands not quite yet touching the surface—he becomes water, his tattooed arms liquefying to a transparent spray. The transformation to a flowing crystal-clear stream spreads in a swift cascade from his head to his toes. What was formerly his diving body is suddenly an arcing wave, splashing into the sea to join up with the ripples dancing across the surface.
By this point, I don’t think there’s any color left to drain out of my face.
I look to Tristan with saucer eyes, my arm still looped over his shoulder as he guides me back toward the parking area. I only see the back of his turned head…He’s been looking back too. As his face slowly rotates back toward me, I search for any signs of shock, dismay, or an impending freakout in his eyes. But I find nothing of the sort. He flashes a polished smile, that crooked tooth practically mocking me with its complete lack of alarm. It’s no use asking if he saw anything strange…Whatever he saw, he clearly isn’t rattled by it (most likely because—like the rest of the sane world—he saw nothing out of the ordinary).
“You think you can make it the whole way?” His voice knocks me out of my stupor. “Maybe I should run ahead and bring the car back this way.” I come to the awkward realization that he’s practically lugging me like a sack of potatoes, with absolutely no help from the dangling pair of useless rubber bands I call my legs.
“I can make it,” I straighten up, willing the jelly in my bones to support my weight. I’m not about to let him walk off and leave me here, with his psycho-murderer-slash-shapeshifter buddy still skulking somewhere out there in the waves. I set my sights on the Jeep Cherokee in the distance, focusing on making one footprint in the sand after another. Those prickly lights make an appearance in my fading peripheral vision again, my ears popping with a muffled hum beginning to drown out the seagulls. I try to be as casual as possible, muttering a garbled suggestion, “Maybe I should go ahead and give you directions to my house now…Just in case I pass out again.”
At that, Tristan scoops me up off my feet, ignoring my grumbling objections. I’m ashamed to say he was slowed down more by my pitiful attempt at walking than by the full weight of my body in his arms. “If you pass out again, I won’t need any directions…I’m remarkably familiar with the route to the nearest emergency room.”
I’d believe his claim outright (there are only so many streets in this town to begin with), but I have the feeling he’s more familiar with the local emergency room than your average citizen. I’d never really noticed the jagged scar trailing down the side of his scalp beneath the curls—curving behind his left ear and ending about halfway down the back of his neck—probably because I haven’t been quite this up-close-and-personal before. It’s way too crooked to be a surgical scar, and it makes the one above his eyebrow look like a paper cut. I imagine there’s probably a captivatingly grisly story to go with it; but frankly I couldn’t have less interest in asking about it right now.
I’ve had all the excitement I can handle for one day.
MY TIDBITS
Although 612 pages is quite heavy for a YA, it was a smooth and interesting enough read to make it flow by without any problem--I got to stay with the characters longer, which was a real plus.
Layla is a great character with an interesting life. She's home schooled, already a novelist at seventeen, lives with her mother and aunt, since her father has disappeared, and is forced to move to a new city every year on her birthday. Despite this life of isolation, she's a very normal teenage girl. She has flaws, is a little snarky and opinionated, tends to be a bit emotionally driven but is able to take care of herself. In other words, she was easy to relate to and a lot of fun to accompany during this story.
The story itself is quite original--a 'type' of humans who are able to transform into an aqua state. It kind of reminds of Atlantis in that they have underwater cities, a form of government and have remained hidden from humanity for years. These creatures were definitely a refreshing twist to the normal paranormal monster presented in current literature.
The plot was enjoyable. It wasn't action packed, but still, there was enough to keep me turning the pages. There were enough unexpected twists and turns to make it unpredictable. It was interesting enough to make me forgive the several unanswered questions and general logic holes, which when filled out, really would have made this an amazing read. The romance was sweet, although I felt it was lacking the necessary tension. Still, the hero was hot and sweet and everything a girl dreams of.
I'd recommend this to YA paranormal fans, who simply are looking for an enjoyable read. It will take them into a new world and let their hearts flutter.
In other words, I give this a . . .
THUMBS UP!!!
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M. A. George is part proud mother of two adorable children, part super top secret agent…Oops, probably just lost that job.
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